Forgot to mention what I revised!
My article summary essay was very long, and some of the articles I used weren't officially academic journals. But after a bit of frustration, I found better articles and cut out what I wrote about the original articles. This version is slightly more streamlined in terms of paragraph structure, and I tried to keep the summaries more concise and informative this time. Also, in order to use the journals I found, I had to broaden my topic a little to include other driving distractions instead of strictly text message usage.
Overall, I think the revised version is more to-the-point, organized, and follows the guidelines of the assignment much better.
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